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Thursday, July 29, 2010


attempting to write *stuff* for my aunt now... but how about the website www.cristallelab.com doesn't even exist! i have no details on the products and i'm supposed to write headings for website banners that are supposed to entice customers, and... wait for it wait for it, i hate writing about stuff i know nothing about! okay la, my aunt gave me simple lines to improve on, but seriously!

"It takes only 1 hour to speed up your skin’s collagen production."

I changed it to:
"Speed up your skin's collagen production in just 1 hour!"

it's so landiao i want to implode! okay, i know i changed it into active voice which is very important, and added an exclamation mark for emphasis (wow, so impressive!), but seriously, doing the same thing for more than 5 times is just so... lame ): and i can't add anything else becuase i know nothing other than what is given! (all the one-liners like that) so basically i am paid to rephrase :/ makes me feel so inept!

okay, at least the other thing is a press release!


on another note, i want to review the last episode of gong xin ji! will be back to edit.


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